Dalai Lama
I would like to have a date with Dalai Lama, (mw)I was always interested in him,(p) and since I was a child I loved his tunics and the tranquility that(mw) inspires. I admire him because he is a man who fights for the peace in the world,(p) for example (ww)in September 1987 he proposed the Five Point Peace Plan for Tibet as the first step towards a peaceful solution to the (ww)worsening situation in (mw)Tibet. When I was a child(p) My mom always read me some of the reflections of this holly man. For example (mws)about Laws of Nature he said that he deeply (wt)believe that human beings are gentle with nature, and he feel that we should not only maintain peaceful and gentle with our fellow human being, (p)also is very important to extend the same kind of attitude to the other (ww)alive being, with our natural environment. We should be concerned for our whole environment. So If someday I could talk with him, I would like (mw)talk about the relationship between (ew)the humans and the environment. I would like to see him in a place without city noises, to hear the sounds of nature like the sea, birds and animals(p)
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Thursday, 4 December 2008
Mauro´s blog December 4th
A country a would like to visit
I would like to visit France......Basically, (ww)cause in France there are lot of bands, good bands(mw), that I dream one day to (ww)see them in (ww)live. Also it's a frequent point of destination for (ww)another bands from the (ew)rest of Europe and North America, because in France there (wt)are a really good music scene. Also I would like to visit France (ww)for make a post-graduate, maybe in urban planning or something like (ww)this.France is a very nice country, with (s)beautifull cities and landscapes, and a great culture with (wo)innovative ideas in the academic area. I have some family friends there. (p)They live in Lyon in the southwest of France. I lived with them for four years here in Chile and I have not seen them (mw)long time ago. It would be great to travel there with friends, people who like the same kind of music as me. It would be great to go for a drink in a bar in Paris, go to a(mw) show or to travel across the county on the TGV, and visit (ew)the beaches of the Mediterranean coast. Also I could go with my girlfriend because (ww)every people says that Paris is a very romantic place.
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I would like to visit France......Basically, (ww)cause in France there are lot of bands, good bands(mw), that I dream one day to (ww)see them in (ww)live. Also it's a frequent point of destination for (ww)another bands from the (ew)rest of Europe and North America, because in France there (wt)are a really good music scene. Also I would like to visit France (ww)for make a post-graduate, maybe in urban planning or something like (ww)this.France is a very nice country, with (s)beautifull cities and landscapes, and a great culture with (wo)innovative ideas in the academic area. I have some family friends there. (p)They live in Lyon in the southwest of France. I lived with them for four years here in Chile and I have not seen them (mw)long time ago. It would be great to travel there with friends, people who like the same kind of music as me. It would be great to go for a drink in a bar in Paris, go to a(mw) show or to travel across the county on the TGV, and visit (ew)the beaches of the Mediterranean coast. Also I could go with my girlfriend because (ww)every people says that Paris is a very romantic place.
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